The Hook — The Platform That Stopped Time
The 7:05 train hissed against the cold Portland morning. Steam curled around the platform lights, and the soft ringing of a bell from a street vendor cut through the sound of engines. That sound would stay with him forever.
Ethan Walker, a graphic designer from Portland, stood still as if motion itself had betrayed him. Lily Carter, the woman who had filled his every notebook margin and coffee-stained dream, was leaving.
He didn’t chase her. He didn’t shout. He only watched the train pull away, carrying half of his life inside a silver carriage.