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When the Music Took Hold
part-3
The fiddler’s bow scraped the first note across the strings, and just like that, the whole barn seemed to come alive. Boots struck the wooden floor in rhythm, skirts spun in circles, and laughter filled the air so thick it felt like it could be bottled.
Eleanor stood at the edge, still clutching the hem of her apron, her heart thudding like a second drum. Thomas’s hand lingered near hers, waiting, patient, as though he already knew she’d say yes.
“Come on,” he urged gently, his voice barely rising above the music. “It’s just a dance. One step, then the next. I’ll keep the count.”
She hesitated, then slipped her hand into his. It was rough, warm, real.
Neighbors cheered as they moved into the circle. The older couples clapped in time, the children stomped along, and the air smelled of cider, woodsmoke, and sweet corn.
Across the room, Mr. Hale, Thomas’s father, was busy trimming the wick of a brass copper ship lantern hung from a beam. The lantern’s glow spread in wide arcs, steady and bright — a symbol of safety on stormy seas, but tonight, a symbol of community gathered close.
“These lights,” he told another farmer with pride, “came all the way from the coast. Ship captains swore by them — not just for light, but for hope when the nights got too long.”
And in that barn, hope felt alive.
The fiddler shouted, “Swing your partners!”
Thomas and Eleanor turned, hands firm but careful.
She tripped once, nearly tumbling, but he caught her, laughing.
“You see?” he teased, steadying her.
“Not so bad.”
Her cheeks burned, but this time from joy, not shyness.
“You’re only saying that because you’ve danced a hundred times before.”
“And now,” he grinned,
“I’ve danced once with you.”
The words stayed with her, sweeter than any tune.
On the side benches, the Carters’ neighbors swapped stories. Mrs. Porter, with silver streaks in her hair, shared how barn dances had kept spirits alive through winters. “When the work is heavy and the days too short,” she said, “these nights remind us we’re more than just farmers. We’re a family.”
Young Jacob, Eleanor’s brother, leaned against the lantern post, watching his sister smile in a way he’d never seen before. “Pa would’ve liked this,” he whispered.
Their mother, seated beside him, nodded with misty eyes. “He’s here, Jacob. Every laugh, every step, every light in this barn — he’s here.”
As the reel sped faster, skirts twirled, boots stamped louder, and the barn itself seemed to shake with life. The ship lantern’s copper frame caught every motion, its glass bending the light into streaks across the walls. For a moment, Eleanor caught her reflection there — cheeks flushed, eyes bright, alive in a way she hadn’t felt since her father passed.
Thomas leaned close as the music softened again. “Thank you… for trusting me.”
“I didn’t have much choice,” she teased, though her voice trembled with warmth. “You’d have asked all night.”
“And I would’ve,” he said, grinning.
When the song ended, the whole room erupted in claps and whistles. Some neighbors slapped Thomas on the back, others winked at Eleanor, and her mother squeezed her hand tight.
“You danced beautifully, child,” Mrs. Carter said, her voice breaking just a little.
Eleanor shook her head with a small laugh. “No, Mama. I just… stopped being afraid.”
By the time the lantern wicks burned lower, the dance floor had slowed to tired sways and quiet conversations. Couples lingered, children nodded off in their mothers’ laps, and a few men debated the best way to stack firewood for winter.
But Eleanor and Thomas? They stayed near the center of the barn, reluctant to let go of that night.
The lantern above them — brass and copper, polished and strong — gave off its last, golden flicker. It didn’t feel like just light. It felt like a promise.
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